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Flash: Crystal

1347532000997-2Buzz drank some red wine from his crystal glass,
while he was trying to walk, but he fell on his ass.
As he looked around the room while he sat on the floor,
he thought of the wine and wanted some more.
So he got on his feet and brushed off the glass,
but he had cut his hand…oh what an ass!
Then he was bleeding, and crying the blues,
because he got blood on his blue suede shoes.
So he went off to the kitchen to get that drink,
but he got very nauseous and puked in the sink.


This is part of the M3 Flash in the Pan word challenge.
Challenged word is “crystal,” with a word limit of 100 words. This one comes in at 100 words.
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  1. Binky

     /  June 20, 2013

    Buzz sounds like a winner!

  2. Poor Buzz – Just not his day!

  3. Great job, Deb, but poor Buzz! 🙂 Sending lots of love and hugs! xoxo

    • Thanks Lauren!
      I think Buzz ought have some coffee. 🙂
      Sending you much love and hugs xxx

  4. That’s what boozing too much whilst drinking from the best crystal will do for you, and then you end up staring into the plughole, bringing it all back!! Wow Deb, memories are made of this. 😉 Wonderfully poetic description, hugs aplenty. xPenx

    • A lesson we can learn it never give your fine crystal to a drunk.
      Buzz’s lesson is. Well, I bet he didn’t learn a thing…lol
      Thanks Pen!
      Love and hugs xxx

  5. Good one! 🙂

    Not only dead on one hundred words, but poetic too!!! 🙂

    Boy do I remember doing this kind of thing when I was younger!!! 🙂

    Love and hugs!


    • This one sort of reminds me of your neighbor, Doug. 😉
      Thank you, Prenin, I’m glad you like it!

  6. I love this writing talent of yours unveiling, Deb!
    🙂 xxxxx

    • Thank you, Marina. I’ve glad your loving it! 🙂
      Have a great day!

  7. Well now….it seems a little familiar..hehehe

  8. -kryształowych dni tobie Deb;-)

  9. Gray Dawster

     /  June 21, 2013

    Eeeeeeeeeeeeuw puking in
    the sink like that how gross 😦
    I think that Buzz should Buzz
    Off after doing that 🙂 🙂

    I like it Deb, keep these little gems coming 🙂

    Andro xxxx

  10. Didnt know whether to laugh or feel sad for Buzz in that little tipster story.

  11. Given his situation perhaps he should have been drinking from plastic. Just a thought 😉

  12. Haha! It’s a poetic flash 🙂 Such fun!

  13. Very nicely done, Deb! Just as long as I don’t have to pick-up the kitchen, that is!

  14. Perfect Deb!

  15. Gray Dawster

     /  June 25, 2013

    Have a great day today Deb, I wonder what
    you will be painting, writing or drawing today? 🙂

    Andro xxxx

    • At the moment I’m sipping my first cup of coffee and shaking off the early morning aches and pains…lol
      I don’t know, I hope I think of something soon.
      I still got one more word to go for this month’s flash in the pan.

      • Gray Dawster

         /  June 25, 2013

        I finished mine last week so I can concentrate of adding a few different pieces for a change, well they might, I mean have been on my old Space before but they are definitely new on this one 🙂 😉

        I hope that your day is a lovely one, hopefully spent drinking in the sunshine whilst glimpsing would-be-wrestling-hunks at the beach 😉 Well I only said 🙂 lmao

        Andro xxxx

        • So I wonder now what you might be drawing or writing about today. Actually, I need to get over to your space to see if I missed anything thing you’ve already posted.

          Trust me, there are no hunks and babes
          on our beaches. They’re either fisherman, or people over 110 years old…lol You must be thinking of the beaches of Florida or California.


  16. Go Buzz Go!!!
    His wife will be surprised when she goes to wash the dishes. Maybe Buzz can blame it on the dog


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