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Flash: Galley

Even though Bud’s friend, Jack was a rehabilitated serial killer, Bud let him stay with him and his sister Carol.
Jack was quite intrigued with Carol. Then one afternoon Bud caught Jack in the galley kissing his sister, and got jealous.
Then one day while Bud was alone in the apartment with Carol, he beat and attempted to rape her. However, Jack walked in, stabbed Bud in the back, cut him into pieces, then disposed his body. As a result, Jack had to leave. Carol wanted to go too, therefore she packed her suitcase and they fled.
Exhausted from driving, Jack stopped to get a room. The next morning he went out to get coffee. Once he returned he decided it was time to leave., He drove down a lonesome highway, stopped, set out her heavy suitcase, then drove off, except Carol was no longer in the car with him.

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This is part of the M3 Flash in the Pan word challenge.
Challenged word is galley with a word limit of 150 words. This one comes in at 150 words.

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22 Comments

  1. Seb

     /  June 7, 2013

    I’m confused! Why would Jack dispose of Bud’s body? Attempting to stop a guy raping his own sister is justifiable homicide in any of the 50 states. And who is Jack’s friend and what does he have to do with anything?

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  2. You certainly packed a lot into those 150 words, none of it dull. Kept me reading. 🙂 Paulette

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    • Thank you, Paulette! And yes, I will keep at it! 🙂
      And all this time I was calling you Mary thinking it was your name. 🙂

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  3. Just read all four of the latest flashes! 🙂

    You have a dark streak M’dear!!! 🙂

    Love and hugs!

    Prenin.

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  4. Binky

     /  June 7, 2013

    So Carol was in the suitcase? I hope Jack isn’t coming over here.

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    • Yes, it little pieces.
      I don’t think he will. Just have Fraz release one of the the Zombies if he does.

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      • Binky

         /  June 8, 2013

        And he can use Sharky and Genie to protect us as well!

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  5. oh man Hey I know where Carol is…oh I mean ..did you say Carol..na ha never heard that name before. 😆
    Dark and Dangerous game has begun in this Blog. Weak hearted do not read 😆

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    • That-a-girl. 😉 🙂
      Nah, not so dangerous, just a little gruesome tale. 😉 🙂

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  6. You are going to end up with my nickname, “Queen of Creepy” if you keep this up Deb. 😉 xo

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    • Wendy, that the one of the nicest things ever said to me about my flash! 🙂 🙂 xo

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  7. I think I may have to change the name of this book to “Flashes off the Slab”!
    xxx

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  8. Yikes again! You’ve really got a way with this horror / suspense thing, Deb…
    very intense! 🙂

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  9. Awesome!! It’s kinda kinky-ish like that Bud was jealous of Jack kissing Carol…I mean Carol was his sister!

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