Waiting for his brother to get home to let him in he stood outside his camper door smoking a cigarette and feels the cold east wind cut right through him. He raises his sweatshirt hood over his head, and as he turns around to shield the cold wind from his face he sees that the sound has been pushed inland from the hurricane’s high forced winds. Feeling very nervous now he takes a puff off his smoke then feels the wind change directions blowing the warm westerly wind onto his face. He knows now that the once sucked up sound that was once present to the edge of the marina is now returning furiously like a raging fire. But never lived to tell the story.
This post is dedicated to the M3 flash fiction challenge
Chosen word: Fire
Inspired by Red at:
Adamsart 
Red
/ November 6, 2012Fabbo flash, Deb. I have been that close to a tornado during a hurricane. Very intense, but very cool feeling.
Love the fresh spring like look. Very clean 😉 ❤ xxx
Deb
/ November 6, 2012It definitely is an interesting feeling.
Glad you like
Hugs xxx
Red
/ November 6, 2012Looks like you may be exploring your darker side ❤
Deb
/ November 6, 2012Yeah, I took a peek at it and let it come out to play for a while.
♥ xxx
Bo Lumpkin
/ November 8, 2012Just make sure it doesn’t move in permanently. It will take over. You would hate to become Darth Debbie.
Deb
/ November 8, 2012Lol…Darth Debbie…lol 🙂
Valentine Logar
/ November 6, 2012Marvelously done and I am sure close to heart and home Deb.
Deb
/ November 6, 2012Thank you, Val!
Krystiana
/ November 6, 2012Deb ty swietnie piszesz….
Deb
/ November 6, 2012Thank you, Krystiana!
writerwendyreid
/ November 6, 2012Wonderfully dark Deb. 🙂
Deb
/ November 6, 2012Thanks Wendy! 🙂 xo
prenin
/ November 6, 2012Good one Deb! 🙂
Love and hugs!
Prenin.
Deb
/ November 7, 2012Thanks Prenin! 🙂
Love and hugs
Binky
/ November 6, 2012Nice, but I hope you just stay away from them!
Deb
/ November 7, 2012If they say evacuate….we go. 🙂
Thanks Binky! xxx
Binky
/ November 7, 2012That’s good to know. Hurricanes are not to be trifled with!
Deb
/ November 8, 2012That’s for darn sure. 😉 🙂
Bo Lumpkin
/ November 6, 2012Good job. You write as well as you paint and that is a compliment.
Deb
/ November 7, 2012Thank you, Bo! 🙂 xx
Madhu
/ November 7, 2012Good job Deb! Didn’t know you were a writer as well! Love the new theme 🙂
Deb
/ November 7, 2012I didn’t know either….lol. Thank Madhu, and for the comment about the theme too. 🙂
jbstoons
/ November 7, 2012Nice tale that keeps you reading to the end. By the way love the new page Deb.
Deb
/ November 8, 2012Thanks Jeremy…for both comments! 🙂
spilledinkguy
/ November 8, 2012What a powerful piece, Deb!
I could almost feel the wind come out from my computer screen!
🙂
Deb
/ November 8, 2012Oh come on, Sig! ;-)…Thank you!
Hey, you have yourself a great weekend! 🙂
Tony McGurk
/ November 8, 2012Intriguing story Deb. A shame that he died.
Deb
/ November 9, 2012I know.
Tony McGurk
/ November 8, 2012I can’t help wonder who voted against Fraz. Fascists!!! 😛
Deb
/ November 9, 2012Agreed! I was surprised to see that too.
Androgoth
/ November 9, 2012An excellent FTP Deb and thank you
for offering such a fine read 🙂 Have a
wonderful rest of evening now Deb and
do enjoy your weekend wrestling 😉
Andro xxx