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Paranoid: Flash in the Pan (100 words)

The narrow cave walls felt as though they were closing in on her, breathing only half the time out of sheer terror. “What was that?” as she quickly turned around, but nothing was there. The feeling that she was not alone became stronger, but she had to keep moving forward. She couldn’t shake her disemboweled friend out of her mind not 100 feet back. Struggling with her thoughts, trying to keep calm, but the damp, cold, darkness was getting the better of her. She swore fervently that she’d change her ways if she could just see the light of day.

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This post is dedicated to the M3 flash fiction challenge.

Word chosen: Light

Inspired by Red at:

http://mommasmoneymatters.com/flash-fiction/FTP-fall2012/

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26 Comments

  1. I can relate … somewhat , although I thought … “Flash in the pan” and “Flash back” where total opposite … as in “funny” and “not funny at all” … but what do I know … as an immigrant, I do sense the message sent via pics … but there is no way to sense a new language …. ever… ever … ever … I feel much saddness about this fact … Always, cat.

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  2. Nice flash Deb. Hate feeling paranoid. xo

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  3. Love this! Great drama, Deb. {HUGZ} Red. xxx

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  4. Binky

     /  October 16, 2012

    Did she do that to her friend? Maybe she shouldn’t get out.

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  5. Need a flashlight??

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  6. wow loved the story..it is scary and suffocating where she is now..

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  7. Nikt nie lubi zamknietych nieznananych miejsc…..

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  8. Nice bit of horror there Debs! 🙂

    Love and hugs!

    Prenin.

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  9. A disembowelled friend???
    Yummy!!!

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  10. Androgoth

     /  October 18, 2012

    This one is pleasantly ghoulish
    just how I like them my wicked
    and wonderful sweet friend 🙂

    Andro xxx

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    • Oh if only I could write like you! 🙂
      Thanks Andro!
      Hugs ♥ XXx

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      • Androgoth

         /  October 18, 2012

        You can, and you do my sweet friend 🙂

        Andro xxx

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        • I’m working on it! 🙂
          Hugs xxx

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          • Androgoth

             /  October 18, 2012

            You have a fine imagination and that is all one needs to write great stories of fiction, blimey you are getting to be the wicked all-rounder, and I like what you add on your Space, it is all really cool 🙂

            Andro xxx

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  11. Wauw this is amazing Deb…I like this very much. Like reading a intriguing book!
    Thankyou so much hun for your visit….wishing you a lovely weekend with much love
    hugs Traceyxxxxxx

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  12. Scary, terrible and wonderful. Love it.

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