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The Journey: Flash in the Pan (100 Words)

   With both eyes squinted, he shadows them from the hot sun with his hand to see how much further his journey will be. Almost there, taking a few more steps, then stops to take a drink of his now warm, water, splashing the remainder over his head and chest, feeling little relief due to the hot breezeless day. Continuing on to his ever so close destination, oddly, there’s a breeze, cool against his damp skin, he stops to embrace it. Looking on as the breeze flows by, only to find that it was the bus that he wanted to catch.

This is in participation of Flash in the Pan originating from Red’s Blog

http://mommasmoneymatters.com/flash-fiction/

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  1. Good writing. At least he wasn’t in front of the bus.

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  2. Great job, Deb, and loved the ending! Hugs! xoxo

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  3. Hey! That was pretty good Deb! Is there no end to your talents? 😉

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  4. Muah!!! Love love LOVE this! Fabulous flash, Deb ❤ Heading off to add it to the book!!
    xxx

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  5. Androgoth

     /  September 26, 2012

    Serves him right for not paying attention 😉 lmao
    Nicely written Deb and now I wiill take a look at
    all of your new paintings 🙂

    Be good tonight, here have a freshly made pancake 🙂

    Androgoth xxx

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    • Yes, in his case he should have had a look behind himself before he decide to stop and indulge himself.
      Mmm, a pancake sound good right about now…thank you! 🙂
      Hugs ♥ XXx

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      • Androgoth

         /  October 1, 2012

        I will have two and one of your special mix choco whip milkshakes 🙂 Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

        Andro xxx

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        • Okay, let me get it going…I’m getting the ice cream out now….hang on…are you still with me?. I’m almost done….BUZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ, sorry the was the blender. One more thing, and, nope, not yet…Okay, now it’s done. I present you with a cool and refreshing, double strawberry swirl milkshake with chocolate laced though like silk. And it’s topped with chocolate whipped cream and two cherries on top, and sprinkle with chopped nuts….Mmmmm

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  6. Well I guess his journey isn’t going anywhere. At least not on that bus.

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    • No, he will either have to sit and wait for another or keep on walking to the next bus stop, Either way, he is now out of water…not good.
      xoxo

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  7. A very good story.

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  8. oh lovely Deb ..you are such a huge bundle of talent…

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  9. Nicely done, Deb!
    Hahaha… hopefully that guy can create a faster breeze than the bus was! WAIT! COME BACK!
    🙂

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  10. Dziś czytam dokładnie twój tekst,czasami mi oczy tańczą wbrew mojej woli…..piękne..

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  11. It’s really good Deb 🙂
    Flash is one of the toughest writing art for me. I joined Red’s Flash in the pan once and would love to do it again one day.

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    • She’ll be waiting for you when your ready. 😉
      Thanks Novroz…I’m glad you like this one! xo

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  12. Sometimes that’s life. Nice work, Deb!

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